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This is a poem
it comes from the soul
the goal of this poem
is to make a girl whole
I'm sorry to hear
that a love you have lost
you see her hearts
starting to cover with
a mid winters frost
but please do not worry
we can save your heart
I wish I could act
before your world falls apart
So little I can do
and even less i can say
but please believe me
Do not turn love away
because if you hold on
Love will come another day

and I can help guide you
back all the way
©2008-2010 ~Blitzer89
:iconblitzer89:

Author's Comments

Love is hard, and I can respect that

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:iconenigmaticangel2506:
Aww I really love this!!!

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I was the girl with a silver umbrella, standing in the pouring rain, in gloom & despair, hurt & miserable, giving in & finally turning her back on the world, just as it had to her.
:iconxsecretkeeptressx14x:
this is lovely I'm gonna fav it!

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its going to be like Romeo and Juliet only with a happy ending...unless something goes wrong...if someone fails to deliver...then we both are going to die

Ich liebe...
:icontiffanysdarklight:
lovely :blackrose:

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give way to fear
or stand to live
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:iconblitzer89:
thank you, im glad you like it

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Now-a-days i just dont care.

do you have a broken heart? i have a cure---> [link]


:heart:'s for Rhymes---> [link]
:iconblitzer89:
thanks^-^

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Now-a-days i just dont care.

do you have a broken heart? i have a cure---> [link]


:heart:'s for Rhymes---> [link]
:iconmuziclover08:
I LOVE IT!!! and i can totally identify with it!!!!!!!!!!!!

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NO me....NO life.....KNOW me ....KNOW life!!
:iconblitzer89:
Really? Thanks ^-^ im glad you like it so much^-^

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Now-a-days i just dont care.

do you have a broken heart? i have a cure---> [link]


:heart:'s for Rhymes---> [link]
:iconmuziclover08:
no i'm glad u wrote such a lovely poem!!

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NO me....NO life.....KNOW me ....KNOW life!!
:iconsole-splendera:
I'm about to cry again.
:iconenigmaticangel2506:
ur welcome

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I was the girl with a silver umbrella, standing in the pouring rain, in gloom & despair, hurt & miserable, giving in & finally turning her back on the world, just as it had to her.

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